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Clarisse McClellan

Clarisse McClellan, you are beautiful
A white dress fluttering around the pale
Legs that dance to an unheard melody
Face vivid like the night moon

Clarisse McClellan, your eyes are like mirrors
I see my reflections in them as you watch me
And I wonder who I really am
And who you are to me

Clarisse McClellan, you are a wood-sprite
You know what it means when
Dandelions leave a yellow glow under your chin
You are in love, it means, with whom?

Clarisse McClellan, you know that rain
Tastes like wine, when you open your mouth to it
And that dandelions bloom in the yards in autumn
And you dance, and walk, and stay up all night just to watch the sun rise

Clarisse McClellan, you asked questions of life
Did not want the given answers poured
Into your head with a funnel at classes
You wanted to seek the truth and share it with me

Clarisse McClellan, you were quick
But not enough to escape the raging machine
You hated how fast and nosily they moved
And died, still disliking it, still knowing that dandelions know if you are in love,
Leaving a golden glow under your chin

And now I am crying for you
So good and so innocent in this vast world
And I wonder, if the tears will taste like wine…
©2008-2009 *Professor-Kirby
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Author's Comments

Ray Bradbury's "Fahrenheit 451" is an incredibly powerful and relevant work of fiction tha everyone ought to take the time to read. :reading:

As soon as she appeared and began to open Montag's eyes to things he'd never thought to notice, I had a strong emotional attachment to Clarisse McClellan. She stands out so vividly against the rest fo the culture he created, extremely quiet, peaceful, observant, and loving. Certainly one of my favorite literary characters.

Entry for ^lovetodeviate's poetic response contest, for which you write a poem responding to a piece of published prose writing.

Poem belongs to me, and Clarisse McClellan to Ray Bradbury

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:iconorphicfiddler:
Oh, that's wonderfully done. I especially like the repeated use of the dandelion and water like wine images. Very pretty. :)
:iconprofessor-kirby:
Thanks so much! I was trying to reflect a taste of the mastery of Bradbury's imagery.

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